The feedback that surprised me the most was how insightful and helpful my comments were. It helped me grow the way I approached the pitch and even made great improvements.
I also found that I even memorized the whole things and I was extremely comfortable in front of the camera it was great. I also feel that the pitch was so much better then my last one and all of the others! This was a great assignment and I feel like I'm a pro now on the elevator pitch!
Hey Zachary, I think overall you delivered a solid pitch. I was really sold on your idea and I think many other consumers would be too. You can tell that you really knew what to talk about and that shows as you mentioned that at this point you had your pitch memorized. In my opinion though, you should have propped your phone up on something in order to get a full body shot. The material of your pitch is perfect, but I feel like you are losing some of your audience by not showing hand gestures. To sum up, I think you did a great job on your pitch as a whole.
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